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About lizshine74

Liz Shine wrote and read her way out of small-minded, small-town doom. We’re not talking about riches here. We’re talking about how a practice like writing can save a person. How it can give hope, shape identity, and ignite purpose. She hopes to write stories and poems that move readers the way certain works have made all the difference to her. She lives in Olympia, WA in the USA. She believes in the power of practice and has been practicing writing since some time in the early 90s when she became an adult in the rain-soaked city of Aberdeen. Writing began with journaling, as a way to understand a confusing, sometimes violent coming-of-age. She writes mostly fiction, some nonfiction, and poetry, and holds an MFA from Pacific Lutheran University’s Rainier Writers Workshop. She has published in Shark Reef, Dual Coast, and Blue Crow Magazine. She is a founding editor at Red Dress Press.

Eavesdropping

This is also from Writers Ask, Issue 40:
Elizabeth Cox explains how she gets to know her characters on and off the page: “Sometimes I eavesdrop on conversations in public places, and I am struck by a phrase or a sentence that I know a certain character…”

Liz says: Has anyone else gotten in trouble for this? Dirty looks. What are you staring at? That sort of thing. I’ve gotten more stealthy with time, I haven’t gotten any dirty looks in a long while, but I do still eavesdrop and people watch.

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A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

Escaping To Write: Day 3

It’s 9:30 AM and I’m just getting started with writing. I woke at 7 and went down to the breakers to take some photos and chill on the rocks. The seagulls were all congregated on the end of the jetti, and I was still sitting there when they jumped up and flew away. That was a cool sight to see. My plan for today is to finish editing my short story manuscript, take some time to read, and work on some poetry. Later tonight, I’ll do some dreaded market research and set some goals about sending out some of my work.
Here we go–
🙂

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It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
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Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

More on Day 2–Still writing!

It’s 9:37 PM and I’m still writing. 🙂
I finished edits to my novel and am now working on my short story collection, Pieces of Cake. My butt is numb, but I’m still writing!

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

Light in August by William Faulkner

Light in August by William Faulkner

This was my first Faulkner novel. I’ve read short stories, but never a novel. I chose to read this because a group of fellow teachers formed a book group, which I signed on for.
I am impressed by the craft demonstrated in the novel. For instance, Faulkner’s ability to switch between tenses and points of view amazed me. His way of giving just a little and withholding the rest built suspense and made getting through what was a fairly complex 500 pages seem like a quick read. Usually when I have to go back and reread whole sections I don’t feel like it was a quick read. Somehow this book was though, and I did have to go back and reread a lot.
I was impressed by Faulkner’s what could have been excessive use of pathetic fallacy to build tension, foreshadow, and establish mood. For all the suffering the characters of this book go through, it’s made even greater because the trees—the houses—the air itself suffers too.
There’s lots that I could write about: his use of light/dark imagery to comment on good/evil, his treatment of race, the motif of heritage, and what we inherit as individuals and as whole societies, the collective sins of families, cities, nations—but I’ll choose one thing—his treatment of women.
Womanfilth is a word I’d never seen and, at first, was put off by. When I think about it though, my question about what is Lena doing in the story—she’s barely fleshed out at all—is answered.
Lena is a figure of hope for womankind. She remains uncorrupted to the end. She perseveres, remains sober and dignified. As she says toward the end, “When they [men] up and run away on you, you just pick up whatever they left and go on.” She does not go crazy for the love of a man. She does not burn up in her desire. She does not sacrifice her own integrity to please him. Unlike other women in the novel, she bears new life and remains strong enough to nurture it. Does Faulkner suggest that there is hope for humankind to be found in the strength and leadership of the matriarch?
Why does humankind need redemption? Because evil exists and sin is also our nature, and no matter how hard our fathers try to beat us pure, or how many criminals society jails or executes, the sins just keep compounding. Faulkner was interested in paradox, the inevitability of suffering, and in offering hope in the face of that. Purity is impossible, Faulkner seems to suggests, but one can just “go on” as Lena does, be strong, like Lena is.

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

Writers Ask

A few excerpts from Writers Ask Issue 40:

Ann Patchett on having a plan:
“I love the story E.L. Doctorow tells. He didn’t have an idea for a book, so he started writing about the wall and then about the window and the garden, and the next thing he knew, he had written Ragtime. Never in a million years would that happen to me. If I don’t know where I’m going when I sit down, I don’t get anywhere.”

Liz’s reaction: It’s happened both ways for me. I like to stay open to both–and more–possibilities.

Susuan Orlean on multi-tasking: “I hate working on more than one thing at a time. I find it really tough.”

Liz’s reaction: Not me! It’s how I roll, man. If I get stuck on one thing, I shift to another for a while, then back when I’m ready.

Charles Baxter on first drafts: “Writing a first draft is the experience of not knowing how to do something and persisting at it until it begins to feel right.”

Liz’s reaction: Sounds about right to me. The story is vague until you get to that point. Vauge, but compelling.

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

Escaping to Write: Day 2

7:40 AM Sunday

Woke up at 6:00 and went for a run on the beach. There is really nothing like running along the water’s edge. The waves sneak up, then retreat. The wind wicks sweat away. The ocean sounds like every answer to every question you ever had. It’s just for you to pick up on the write conversation being whispered. The seagulls are congregated for their morning feast.
The distance it took me to get from my hotel to the water’s edge was enough time to dump the clutter in my mind, so that I could focus on the important questions regarding my novel. So, I asked myself some important questions—at one point was actually talking out loud to my main character—as I ran, ran, ran. The last question was the scariest, but I asked. What’s the point, Liz? I was ecstatic to find I had an answer. So, as I walked a cool down back to the hotel, I ran over the breakthroughs I’d come to. Now, I’m getting started in implementing those changes in the current draft and the question is: where do I start? I think I’ll start with one change at a time, figure out where in the story I need to start with it and then thread it through to the end. Then, I’ll do the same for the next change.

Namaste.

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

To Be Of Use–

From “To Be Of Use” by Marge Piercy:

The people I love best
jump into work head first
without dallying in the shallows
and swim off with sure storkes almost out of sight.
They seem to become natives of that element,
the black sleek heads of seals
bouncing like half-submerged balls.

For the next several days, I want to manifest this work energy and jump into writing head first. So far today, I’ve edited three short stories. Tonight, I’ll write something new before getting back to the editing. 🙂

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

Escaping To Write: Day 1

12:15 PM Saturday
Sitting in a cute little café getting started with my own personal writer’s retreat. Over the next several days, I’ll be writing to you from Ocean Shores, where I’ve escaped to write, write, write, until my fingers ache from over use. As soon as I’m done here, I’m getting warmed up with editing my short story collection. I intend to keep you posted several times a day on my progress and whatever random observations and insights I think you might be interested in.
So, how do I get started? First, I’ll blog about my plan (did that!), then I’ll dive into the first story on my list. Now, to that—

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

Not writing lately?

Not writing lately? Check out these tips for overcoming so called “writer’s block”.

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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone

The Golden Notebook–Doris Lessing

The Golden Notebook by Doris Lessing

I came across this novel as a teenager, struggling to write. You see, I had this intense desire to write, felt that I had something to communicate, but did not yet have the skills to meet my imagination on the page in a way that worked consistently. So, I sat in cafes and poured over the writers I admired, hoping to inherit their style by diligently underlining phrases—whole sentences—and in general, swooning over their prose. One of these books, read clutching my own spiral notebook and pen in various coffee shops around town was The Golden Notebook by Doris Lessing.
“This novel, then, is an attempt to break a form; to break certain forms of consciousness and go beyond them. While writing it, I found I did not believe some of the things I thought I believed: or rather, that I hold in my mind at the same time beliefs and ideas that are apparently contradictory. Why not? We are, after all, living in the middle of a whirlwind.” This description, taken from the jacket cover of one edition of the book, only begins to touch on why I have such a powerful connection to this book.
Unflinching questions about what it means to be human, a woman, and a writer are posed in Lessing’s novel. Anna, the main character writes about different parts of her life in four distinct notebooks and tries to bring them all together in a fifth “golden notebook”. This process drives her to insanity and back. I read this book on the edge of my seat, amazed at the complexity and depth of the characters and the refreshing honesty in Lessing’s treatment of them. The seamless shifts and turns between the notebooks, between action and narration left me mouth agape in awe. I longed to write like that. This book changed my life. It sealed my fate as a writer, pushed me to question my role as a woman in society and in my family, and unraveled for me the nature and necessity of freedom.

Buy my books here.

Interested in hiring me as a coach to get you boosted with your writing goals?
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Some past posts to keep you making time: 
Adjust your pace accordingly.
It’s about the routine and how you shake up the routine
There are things you will have to give up
See it to achieve it
Washing the dishes
Write slowly
A celebration of the pause
Monday, a run through the driving rain
Zen accident
Get out of your comfort zone